OK now that i have read the whole story till chapter 5 i cant wait for an update, update soon. its pretty interesting and took me back to the times when i use to write crime plot is Strong and interesting.

Don't you just hate it when someone breaks into your house and forgets to lock the door on their way out?

Wow, you really have me hooked! I can't wait for you're next chapter.

She's pretty confident, when she said I KNOW your into me lol. That was a little unexpected, but hey, it worked.

i love this, it does make me wonder what happen to the girl though? was she raped or just was beat?

First of all I wanted to say that I love the name Ellis, and I completely agree with her when she says pizza is not italian food lol. Thanks for updating so soon!

Whoa, what a beginning! It makes me want to read more, so update soon!