Reviews for Knights, Knaves, and Nautical Miles
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Really well written! :)
YasuRan chapter 1 . 12/11/2011

I can really go on and on rereading your work and find something to think about. How you present your ideas and themes is so refreshing. Even sensual, as in this piece, where the mouth takes on a whole new meaning - 'a metaphor, a man, a mouth can never be a woman'.

I like how the idea of a woman is conveyed more through content than medium, sound rather than substance. The water leaking from the pipe and the echo. It's sometimes how I see my role during some hopeless times. The last stanza is once more a great clincher.