|Reviews for Mastiff|
| Ayx chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
The last line of this poem is pure magic.
| OspreyEagle chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
That's all I can say, really...
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
A lot more closed-off than the previous ones I read but interesting all the same. I like your word choice - 'smoky congeniality', 'post-poster-children' in particular.
| William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Very revolutionary mindset, reminds me of the hippie culture but with less drugs and a broader vocabulary.
Your use of imagery to convey your ideal is very clever. in particularly making war assume the role of a prostitute, i think there is a lot of power in those words.