|Reviews for Stormy Weather|
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Good job on the imagery! Really imaginable atmosphere, feels like I can really hear the thunder :)
Only one complaint: I admit I have a feeling the last line doesn't really fit with the rest of the poem. "Just get used to it" to me sounds like something someone would say who isn't really comfortable with their situation but has found their peace with it... it's kinda hard to explain.
(Oh yeah, and it's "lightning", not "lightening" like "enlighten". Just saying.)
Anyways, don't mind my complaining: this is a great job, and I really like this poem! Keep writing (: