Reviews for The Bat Who Couldn't Fly
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
okay, I get it you are trying to be positive here and I take it that it has to do with your family. Okay, personal assessment for me (myself) maybe once one's fears are truly taken on maybe then and only then one can really let themselves feel the "fluff". No- no jokes here, I am assessing my thought to help you properly.
Turtle1999 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Aww that's so sad...In the 5th line, I think you meant to say They but you said the, you might want to fix that.
Quasimagical chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Oh goodness~ This is so very sad! That poor little bat!

Anyways, I really enjoyed this; it was short, sweet, simple, and the imagery and emotion behind it was lovely~
Sukiam6 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
A bat that couldn't fly literally would die.

typo line 5.

where is he going if he can't fly?