It is a good read. Her floating in the sea and him noticing her..everything is cute. Although Nick - her ex deserves some kind of pain in the plot..that is not there as he is not projected as main character. But it is a light weighted story. like it.

I really enjoyed reading this, and I loved your characters so much! I love Regan's sarcastic attitude and Will's grumpiness, and both if them together are adorable :) thank you for such a great story - I'm sure I will read it again!

Cute :)

aahhhh so cuuuuuute

Oh so cute. I should go to the beach more. hahahahhaha.

"how Edward Cullen of you" lol really cute story!

Aw! Stupid Nick. This is amazing! The length is perfect. Oh my god! I wanted more! LOVE IT!

Wow that was so much fun :)
I think you successfully avoided any cliche-type potholes with your brilliant writing style.
The characters (and the supporting characters) were great (and well thought-of).
Lovely :)

Loved it! Cute story!
Megan :)

Oh, so cute! I love the pace throughout.

Haha :) I adore this

I find that this story is eerily similar to my own life. I am extremely freaked out.. Minus the three supporting hot male friend of the lead male, this is my life.

this was so cute! i loved it! and i love Will! i find him so adorable despite his ...strange personality hahahah maybe you can do spin offs on the other characters? heheh that would be awesome too! lol

Wow I was actually really impressed by this one-shot, which is pretty unexpected for me. The pace of the story/development of the romance was just really believable and was definitely helped by the wonderful characterization, especially of Regan. Also there were almost no grammatical/typographical errors which always is a plus.

So yeah, brilliant job and I definitely think I'll be checking out your other fics! ]

Ahhh, what a beautiful story! I loved the characterisations, the pace, the plot, lets just say I loved everything! Great job.