Reviews for Goodbye to You
logan89 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
The relationship between sisters, and the pillow fight was very nice. This reads like Elisabeth has an arrange marriage that was setup by her father. You can hear the hesitation in her voice and body language about not wanting to leave home, but she resounds that it is her duty. Your dialogue is great between the sisters. Your introduction of each character was done perfectly. Thank you for sharing.