Wow, just wow. That's one heck of a cliffhanger, the yaoi fangirl inside me wants the next chapter. Though you executed that well, just enough to keep me intrested, though not to the point where I'm checking every second for a new update.

Can't wait to see what happens next. (I'm guessing they get walked in on.)

*pokes* Hey, um. Author?

I think you've got the wrong pairing. *nods*

Because it's supposed to be Adam and Darren. Yea.

So, um. Fix this?

XD

I was really rooting for some Darren and Adam, but alas, I guess it is not to be.

...For now.

Anyways, enjoyed this chapter. Poor Adam, getting kicked out and all.

~Con

I adored this opening, Darren and all. Who, for some reason, I like slightly. I couldn't find anything wrong with the story in its self. So, all in all, it was a great beginning and I want to read more.

Darren is a dick. Like, I want to castrate him :/

But~ I like this so far! I want more, please!

~Con