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cliff hanger!

promising beginning

Exciting chapter! Keep it up _

I'm so happy you updated! This chapter turned out so different from what i expected but it is so great. I can't believe that that stupid Lindt guy just killed his own people like that and took Larke's ship without even a pause. I really hope that Crowley manages to get to Larke before that bomb goes off. I wonder if Lindy still has the ambush set though because if so, that will cause a lot of issues when trying to save Larke. And i really hope that Larke just passed out from the pain, and not because the wound is fatal or something. I can't wait to see what happens when Crowley gets there to save him and if the did go after Lindt. Please update soon! Thanx, bye!

I love this story so far! It's been so long since i've read a good sci-fi story and i can't wait to see where this is going. Poor Larke, he doesn't even realize what Crowley's teasing means and he just thinks he's being rude. He is going to be so surprised when he figures ou it's because Crowley likes him. I really hope that Larke isn't going to go out by himself with no backup like those last lines imply. He is such an idiot if he is, but at least that will give Crowley an opportunity to save him. And i love Jay, he is like Larke's outgoing Uncle and i can't wait to see if he already knew that Crowley likes Larke. Update soon! Thanx, bye!