Reviews for His Desire
rapunzoll chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Quite a sad poem.
I like the two lines towards the end; "Because she has a heart of gold. Mine is fire"
It sounds a bit like the narrators saying the other girl is kind and sincere (with her "heart of gold"), which may make her the 'safe choice', whereas she's more passionate with her heart of fire, or that her heart is reckless and destructive like a fire. I don't know really, but that's just my interpretation of it.
:)
True Talker chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Thank you for sharing this it is beautiful yet sad.