Reviews for The Perfect Girl
Taylor chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Okay, so I think your story is absolutely amazing, and cute, and wonderful! I do have a couple critiques though ;) As you wished! First, I feel like it's going too fast. One minute, they're friends, one minute they're more - and only in the 1st chapter. But I have to admit, I like this equally to other writings where it starts later. It's kind of a new thing, and I like it! Not sure about others, but I do (:

Second, which is spelling. I think you should revise it, before editing. I saw a couple mistakes, which are no big deal, but if it matters to some people, that wouldn't be good :P Sorry, if I'm being harsh, just my opinion (: Good luck, and I am for sure going to keep reading! :D
TheEvergreenShadow chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Aww, this is sweet! It's cute how they gave each other hints even though they both knew the truth :)