This story is amazing and if this character has anything to do with you, then you're a very strong individual. I also experienced an "unpleasant" breakup not too long ago and everything was so confusing, hurtful and frustrating. Especially when I wasn't expecting it at all. Sometimes you wish you'd said something else or done something different. I sort of obsessed over what I should have said or done when everything was happening to me. But the past is the past. So I learnt to leave it there. Anyway, I believe a lot of girls need to read this because they can often lose themselves in a guy who's only going to hurt them. Then I realized, I really deserve much better and now I can see we weren't meant to be. Great story!

Wowzers. This was really amazing. Like, seriously I loved it!

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Reading this story is like reading your personal journal - it just feels to private and personal to be comfortable reading. I would have made it a third person account (the writer's narrative voice) with more dialogue and narration to capture the feelings of the lead character and to distance you (as the writer) from the personal pain that bleeds through in every word, thought, sentence and paragraph. The site is "fiction press" and while many writers capture truth in their stories and writings, most mask it by 'fictionalizing' the reality through fictionalized characterization and settings to make it one step removed from their own experiences.

Three years later you still sound just as pained as when this all started so you have much work to do. Good luck - I know writing is therapeutic but maybe it would help you ease the pain if you could fictionalize the story more. Just know that it WILL get better for you...with time.

hi..that is really very interisting story...no offence...but i think that you still love him by the way you wrote on the last line"I hope he never has to go through the hurt he put me through."

This story, it just... I'm lost for words. I'm so touched by this story, I haven't read something this touching in a long time... Quite a breath-taking story, actually...

So well written, amazing, just incredible, and based on a true event? Best story I have ever read based on a true event.

Dear Arya,

Thank you for your review. I tried to reply to your review using the review option for authors but i'm not sure it worked, so i will post it again here:)

Yes I am Singaporean, but I have been in Australia since I was seven (where the story happened).

Thank you for your empathy :) i guess it was hard for me to accept because i hadn't had any friends or family go through these types of things so, as well as the fact that i was the youngest child in the family so it was probably harder on my parents at the time. Thank you for your comforting words and I am glad to say, I am definitely better off now than I was in 2009.

The reason i wrote this story to begin with is so others, who hopefully read my story, won't have to go through the same path as I did and I'm glad there has been responses to this story.

Thank you for spending time to read this story and I hope things will go well for you :)

~ Endy x

Hey, i am reading this story in the middle of the night at 3 am in the morning. And one thing i want to say is that life goes on. No matter what happened. Since this is based on a true story i assume the country you name is true? If so i wanna ask if you are a Singaporean? Because I am one too... I sympathise with your story because I know ppl (friends and relatives) that have gone true similar things... and i wanna say that everyone of them is someone i respect, because they have managed to stand up again despite everything. I sincerely hope that you would be able to do the same.

Sad. I'm glad you've found someone good for you now though, and that your relationship with your family is healing. Well written.