Reviews for The Elemental Academy for the HigherUps
C. Khafre chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
Great story, so far! Hydro and Neon are simply smoking hot (especially together), and I liked reading about the rest of the characters as well (except for those that try to stop that get in the way of Hydro and Neon- they should just let the bros be)! The academy chairpeople sound quite sinister and it would be good to read more about the kinds of stuff they do (and also more of Hydro and Neon's backstory). I hope Chapter 6 won't be the last chapter of Elementals Academy!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
Absolutely love the story so far, the characters are really fascinating and i love the way you show the different view points. My favourite characters however have got to be Hydrogen and Neon!
Thank you for posting a GREAT story, i can't wait to find out what happens next :)
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
crapcrapcrapcrapcrapcrap! It wasn't Carbon's fault, Arsenic! D:

; - ;

This is suuhgood, and weirdly scary! I was really worried that they'd leave Lithium behind, 'cause I like Lithiumbby ; - ; Aha, but my favourites are still Neon and Hydrogen, omg.
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 4 . 4/12/2012
Dammit Neon! Without you he has nothing to live for! ; - ;

Uugghh, despair, despair!

And the Beryllium(?) thing has me wetting myself. Is that head teacher stupid! NOBODY MUST DIE.
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 3 . 2/26/2012

Forgive me! I read this when you updated on my phone in school but I couldn't review then and I've only just remembered now.

Seriously. I loved this.

Like, so much. I was addicted to this chapter and even got my phone taken away a couple of times because you lead me to read during lessons.

Yes. I blame you completely.

Aha, no but seriously, it was great. I'm really interested about Neon's weird thingy side, and I'm not going to lie- the fight scene weirded me out, but it was well done so no complaints there


(Ahem. Good job.)
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 2 . 1/19/2012

I can't believe it took this long to get to this!


But I absolutely adore it! Honestly, this is fast becoming one of my favourites on FP xx
writingright chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I read this as promised ;D I'm interested in where this is going.

small tip- when a new speaker comes in add a new paragraph, it breaks it up and makes it easier to read ;D

as a story it was interesting, def somthing I'll be keeping my eye on XD
Yellow Cotton Hat chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Love this so much! It's written so well and it's so intriguing, YOU HAD BETTER NOT LOSE HOPE WITH THIS ONE! D:


Haha but seriously, wow. I was shocked when I read this, it's such a good idea! Weird, strange, dark... I don't know, but I can tell this will be EPIC.