Reviews for light beyond darkness
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
I Love the emotion in this, I can feel it throughout. This is very sensitively portrayed and well thought out.

My one criticism here and I truly hope this is not offending to you, as it certainly is not my intention. However I would be a little careful on the spelling. It would take this piece from being excellent to being exceptional.

Well Done

Fabian Cortez
Willowinthepines chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
a mix between a poem and a story? unusual but i liked it. the description really added to the piece, it made me think and see. i felt the emotions of the lead and was rather disappointed to find out that they never got together. oh well not everything has a happy ending. keep writing.