Reviews for The Realist
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Wonderful use of descriptive imagery. This was very well done, and I liked the combination of dreaming imagery, rolling nausea and reality. You definitely had good progression here moving from one point to the next, especially as it reached the end. Really cleverly done; I like the variations and changes in the dreams as they progress, and the descriptive focus on the beginning really drew you in. You did a good job combining reality with dreams, although the ending did seem a little disappointing. I felt like something else should have been said, but that's purely my opinion. Anyways, really well done! This was a very interesting read! :)