Reviews for Beast To Prince
Elise the Writing Desk chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
Useless guide...CHE! Go Jae! Just do it your way, heheh! This chapter is free from Amadeus-Violences-Hazards. :P Save for children under 6 years old, I guess...ahaha

I was practically having a stupid wide cheshire grin on my face because of that goddamn guide. Hilarious...*sniff* if I was her, I'd burn that book into ash, hahaha!

Well since this chapter is short, I guess something is missing...err...yeah well, I'll find about that later. But guess what! You've got a little mistake for this chapter...alright...TWO mistakes of the chapter, then!

"Jae then messages..."

Apparently this is the common mis-spell for common authors. Please differ between 'Message' and 'Massage'. The one you're looking for that sentence is 'Massage'.

"So just remember that he would treat any other person like you, which is in his eyes a pile of trash!"

There is one thing missing here. One tiny little thing!

the 'as' between 'eyes' and 'a'!

The correct sentence shall be:

"...which is in his eyes, as a pile of trash!"

OMG keep on rocking, useless guide, ahahaha!

Alright I'm onto the next. See if I can find out what's missing!
Elise the Writing Desk chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
AHAHAHAHA! Smart kitty! XDD

This chapter is comically hilarious

Wow Jae is pretty determined to take care a big guy as a pet o.O I'd be on my knees and got shot if I was her... (._. )

There are some typos when you wrote Amadeus' name. Two or thee, I'm on the mobile site so it's a pain to go to the prev. page.

And at last I noticed something is missing in this. Where's the time line. How many days has it been since Jae accepted to train Amadeus? I mean seriously, can he gain weight so quickly to the point of...his face getting more chubby in three days just because he was lazying on the couch eating meats?

And seriously that Owner's Guide totally cracked me up! XD Just let Jae do it her own way, then...hahaha!

I guess it's a good chapter except for the typos after all. Remember to put in a tiny bit hint of the timeline.

Adieu~ Happy Holiday
HungerInHerEyes chapter 3 . 12/26/2011
Great story! Update soon!
Starlight Crystal 9 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Wow! i love your story. It's awesome and so creative. i've never actually read this type of story where the pet is like a human. i love his personality. it's so funny how they interact. update soon. bye
TheEvergreenShadow chapter 2 . 12/24/2011
Ooookaaaaay... this is a strange story. Ahahaha, I love it! Unique plot line and strangely believable characters, this story has some serious potential! I had seen your story before, but was pretty hesitant to click; I'm so glad I did! Update soon!
Meco45 chapter 2 . 12/22/2011
I'm becoming a fan-girl haha. I love the story; awesome beginning. The characters are amazing, and I just love your writing style!

Please Update soon!
redxkitten chapter 2 . 12/22/2011
i'm baaack im sad the chapters will be short but glad that you'll continue
Elise the Writing Desk chapter 2 . 12/22/2011

Jae is sooo cool! Better than Yuiko in the Beast Master XD I like this courageous and hard-worker main character! :D

Amadeus is starting to be cute, but I can't really imagine a 'full-grown man' to act like a pet... o.O

But this chapter is nice and written even nicely. BUT I laughed at your mistakes. You should really refrain from getting up late and write or you'll get whacked off like this.

Since the Mistakes of the Chapter is so...hilarious

Jimin rubs her temple, trying to think of...

*cough* Jimin...? *cough*

"I was thinking that since you've been in the house so long you might want to each outside."

Each. Outside. What's that? :/

Anyway get a rest and lots of sleep! And pepero almond pepero will be better! And starbucks! Lots of them! ;)
redxkitten chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
at first i was sort of confused by this story but now i like it its interesting i look forward to your next chapter happy writing
Elise the Writing Desk chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Hey this is actually interesting... :)


U must have somekinda twisted mind to put up good and twisted plots! XD This is hilarious and I seriously can't wait to read how she's gonna tame them! XDD

omg i smelt harem, i swear, or it's just me?

BTW you've got typos a bit, here and there but it's just fine.

BUT I don't really get this line, it was Jae's dialogue

"You told me you would leave your dog with me for seven days, but you suddenly the date to five on the forth day."

...but you suddenly what the date? PSHAW...

Anyway u better not slack off ur other stories. Writing new stories is good though so you wouldn't have to get whacked off and got bored :) Inspiration is coming! XD

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