very creative interesting plot. and i can't wait to see how it ends. you had a few spelling errors here and there but other than that your writing is tight!

Ahhh... Fido is a hyponist. i LOVE THIS chapter!

OMG, I LOOOOOOOVVVVEEE youuuuuuuu! Such an awesome chapter, and totally worth the wait!

yay, you updated! i really love this story so please finish it soon, because i want to know the ending.

luv izzet

I have to admit I just read the 22 chapters in one day, I loved all the wonderful pets you have created so far. I even feel sorry for Jae, I think she should cut a deal with the company and accept to train them in exchange for one pet for herself -it would be hard to choose wich one though- or she could request to know how they are doing with their new owners.

It would be weird but she should try to get Severus a job as a firefighter, I think he would make the citys firedeparment a popular option for donations and would improve the popularity of the mayor, in theory Severus owner would be the city and he would be "more than a pet"... and I dont know why I thought all of this...

I really love this story so I am begging you for an update SOON.

love the story! so funny- can't wait to find out why Fido is dangerous. - wow that kinda sounds weird. at least more than I thought it would :P
love your other stories too!

The whole S&M thing was so hilarious!

I am cracking up here! That was hilarious and brilliant!

There is totally something up with this kid... Hes older than me though but still he sounds so creepy but his eye colors sound adorable

He doesn't seem very dangerous. I'm a little scared actually, if he isn't being dangerous now, I wonder what got him into the 'dangerous' catagory... Great work on the chapter by the way, I love your story and I can't wait for you to update again!

He's... odd. I feel extremely horrified for some reason. I just can't shake off this feeling... But I kind off agree with Fido, who would forget those idiots *cough* Prince *cough*? Please update soon and I love your stories, especially the reverse harems! Such the life of an otaku who love revese harems with strong female protagonists.

I think he messes with Jae mentally... Like maybe mind control and illusions. Whyelse hasn't she bothered looking for the guide when she's had so many chances to. There can only be one reason that I can think of.

I also think Fido's power over regular people doesn't affect the other Pets 'cause they're practically brutes? Anyway that's just my assumption.

Good chapter :3

Hmmm... I want more soon!

XD. Oh. My. God. Severus made me laugh when he said, "GET ME THE FUCK OUTTA HERE!" and, "I DON'T GIVE A CRAP, SCUM!" That just made my day...well morning, considering it's 5 A.M O.O. Lol. I love this story to pieces! I honestly can't wait until you update this. I want to know what's so horrible about Fido :3! These 'pets' are hilarious xD. I love Severus and Amadeus .. Hopper kind of reminds me of that pokemon Hoppit. Maybe because they have similiar names or maybe because I imagine hopper being pink and wearing green suits ;o. But, UPDATE!

Also, an idea popped into my head whilst I was reading this. Maybe after Jae has trained Fido, Hopper calls and says the others are acting up, and he wants to hand ownership over to her, since she's the only one who can truly tame them? Idk, just a thought.

But update nonetheless ). It makes the gingerbread men smile xD.

XD. Oh. My. God. Severus made me laugh when he said, "GET ME THE FUCK OUTTA HERE!" and, "I DON'T GIVE A CRAP, SCUM!" That just made my day...well morning, considering it's 5 A.M O.O. Lol. I love this story to pieces! I honestly can't wait until you update this. I want to know what's so horrible about Fido :3! These 'pets' are hilarious xD. I love Severus and Amadeus .. Hopper kind of reminds me of that pokemon Hoppit. Maybe because they have similiar names or maybe because I imagine hopper being pink and wearing green suits ;o. But, UPDATE!

Also, an idea popped into my head whilst I was reading this. Maybe after Jae has trained Fido, Hopper calls and says the others are acting up, and he wants to hand ownership over to her, since she's the only one who can truly tame them? Idk, just a thought.

But update nonetheless ). It makes the gingerbread men smile xD.