Levi was so skeptical about Phoebe at first. I guess being a vampire for so long can do that to you.

Fee is such a witch! Richard is more likeable. :3

-Ink

really good story, ur a great author...

:)

This story was so sweet! :) I still hate Feliciana but I hate Richard a lot less now. Phoebe and Levi belong together more then Levi and Feliciana. She's such a jerk! -_-

Aw! This was such a good story! It's so sad that it's over! I loved it so much!

Are you hinting that they're will be a sequel? What happened to Miranda? Where'd she go? Is Steven killed? So many unanswered questions!

Something could happen to Phoebe in the next story. Like, she could have a power or she could be wanted by some of the biggest Vampires. It's endless to what could happen to her! :3

~caj35

THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING! Although it is true that the end was totally cliched but I still loved it XD and from what it kinda sounded like is that youd continue it - are you?

Wow but now you've already got another story going - your really fast at that and seem to have a lot of spare time on your hands - unlike me with my crap loa of homework XP bleh

Anyways I'll check out that new story of yours aaand I need to finish reading the one that you wrote about the angel and the demon and that girl- I haven't finished that one yet

I really love this story and great ending! Mehh! I hate how it's the last chapter! :{D

Such a cute ending.. 3

It feels that screaming how much I love this story at the top of a rooftop isn't enough. I LOVE THIS STORY! And I can NOT wait till the upcoming chapters!

That was so cheesy and corny. All in all a good story though.

I know I already reviewed, but I had an idea... Maybe Phoebe could have a power when she's Vampire. That could be in the sequel too.

Is there going to be a sequel since we don't know that Steven is alive? :o And Miranda escaped? :3 Questions!

Oohh Mermaids. Mystifying.

Lol. I feel empty if no one reads my writing.

Poor Levi. :( Steven's a mean person! Phoebe is a sweet girl and now she be dying because of him. :( Awesome chappy!

Good for Kalene. I was wondering when she would grow a pair.

Oh. Yeah, I figured it was almost done. I just wanted to make one. I have to put my stories somewhere, lol. :P

Steven's a pure asshole and HE'S the monster. Killer innocent people for no reason. Wow. Well I hope that Levi and Kalene find Phoebe before she dies or gets any serious injuries!