Heh. I LOVE charactera like that! :3 I don't habe one like that yet, but when I keep on writing this I might. Teehee.

Fee. She's oozing with Jealousy Richard just loves it, I can tell. Hehe.. Feliciana is a good "bad guy" character. Is she gonna become one of Phoebe's best freinds at the end? :o Is there going to be a sequel? :o So many questions! Lol.

Pheobe is afraid of falling in love? Aww. That's sweet, I think. Everyone is at first, I think.

Feliciana is just a beyoch, huh? She wants what she can't have. She could go for Richard, but of course, she's a stubborn little thing...

Great few Chapters! Loved them!

Oooh now Feliciana is coming in and threatening Phoebe. And that was cute on how Levi had bought her that sun necklace. Aand Richard and that other vampire dude - well actually just the other vampire dude whos name I've forgotten hasn't been mentioned in the story in a while. I wonder when he's gonna come back in

Haha awesomeness. Whatch I bet someone will comebin and see her in that position XD anywaus, can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter and I wanna know if someone's gonna die when Phoebe's "aunt" comes.

Aww. Poor Pheobe. She's such a wreck. Levi should've known that she couldn't possibly be happy there when she had been kidnapped. Then she killed thr hunter on accident. Tsk, tsk, tsk. This Chapter was flooding with emotion. I really loved it and hope to read more soon!

O.o Pheobe killed the Hunter? OMG! Twist! :3 I didn't expect that. Feliciana is the devil. Jealous bitch. Very good, can't wait fot more! :3

Alright... so i should probabl be freaking out cuz she killed a person... but I'm more intrested in knowing what Richards reaction will be when he finds out she's been in his room...

Aww! He wanted her to kiss him! That's so sweet and utterly disturbing way of doing that.

And now she knows. Muwahahaha! Oh, so how did Kalene know she was half vampire? :o Does Levi know too? Stupid question. Of course he does.

Ahhh. Having a Mind AND Dream reader has got to be difficult.

Um... I don't think it was. But then again I'm not the best person to go to for history details.

Just finding out she's half-vamp and coming out with a casual "How's it going?" Love it. Their little session made my stomach flutter. It was about time! I love Kalene though. She seems so awesome

I think my heart stopped beating for a sec when Levi said that. I knew it was coming sooner or later... but THAT was just kind of random.

I love it(:

So does everyone know except for Phoebe?

250 years didn't seem like a lot at first, then I realized he was like from the 1700s. Around Shakespeare's time! Was he born in America?

Oooh. Yeah I hadn't seen he was an Enthrall. That makes sense now(:

I was kind of hoping that Levi would give Fee a few blows she could remember him by... yea maybe more.

Anywho, I really like your characters and how you don't all give them the same traits. You give them all different specific presonalities instead of doing a few things different but the rest of the traits all meshed together.

Kalene is still my favorite(;

Hehe she just mentioned her friend Angie again. I wonder when she's going to know that one of the vampires killed her friend... Anyways still loving the story and I wanna keep reading more!