Cute :)

I actually waited with reviewing until I read all of your story's, and I really like them and I absolutely LOVE the take me from this pain story's and their sequels. It's a shame you didn't finish more than friends 3

: ) nice fluff

cute story

ive read ur stories and theyre rlly good but im not old enough to go on adultfanfiction...is there any way i can read ur sotries like the one after MOving On? pls email me at ndyuong gmail . com

So fluffy... I'm squealing here! Those god-awful pickup lines... Oh, Nick, that's not how you do it! Glad that he wised up though :P

awww cute

WTF. Dude! Don't leave us hanging, un-end the story!

aww, this was sweet ) the end put a goofy smile on my face xD

... Nick... Is just too hot... *swoon* I just love his character! What a so-definitely-out-there flirt! And flirt is an understatement. ;] I enjoyed the story entirely. I actually read it three times, and I've been meaning to review. It's just fp is not the easiest to access on the iPhone.

Nonetheless, I have read a good number of your stories and unfortunately for myself, I've been losing sleep to finish them in one go. It's a good thing for you, I guess. ;P

Please keep writing!

I do declare, Mrs. Esquirella, I oh so luv mah story! Thank you kindly!

Cute :-)

Even though the ending was a bit quick, the story in itself was cute and heartwarming.

Thanks for it.

This was a lovely story. Your writing style is fantastic! I enjoyed the nerdy virgin being deflowered by the experienced stud very much. I love one-shots and you did a fantastic job with this one. I especially loved the following except of Nick and Robert's conversation at the party:

"Head, now THERE'S a great idea," Nick exclaimed.

"Well, hopefully you're flexible enough to give yourself a good time!" Robert settled himself into the driver's seat of his car and moved to close the door, but Nick had quickly blocked the move with a palm against the inside of the window.

I laughed out loud reading that! So freaking funny! And at this:

"Because I think we could have a great time together," Nick finally responded. "And you would too if you took that stick out of your ass and let me replace it with something bigger but less sharp."

OMG! He has Micky Mouse tattooed on his ass! lol. Too funny but so cute!

p.s. Honestly, I didn't miss you not writing the "action." Anymore, I'm more interested on how they get there (the build up.)

Yay I'm the first reviewer! Nice to see you back. I laughed out loud several times during the dialogue. The ending was such a tease! If it's a one-shot at least let them finish off! Haha.

Hm, as for con-crit, the adverbs get tangled a bit sometimes. It might be good to cut some of them out to improve the flow. I'd like if this one continued! It was really cute.