Reviews for Myths and Legends of the Yolan People
017Bluefield chapter 2 . 12/23/2011
Doesn't really give a reason why Alfaa didn't want anything to grow there again.
Neuravinci chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Are your names by any chance Arabic in origin? Qamar-pronounced Ka/mer, I presume, sounds like the Arab word for Moon. I lvoe this!
Neuravinci chapter 2 . 12/23/2011
This is a very nice twist on the Bible. I find this all the more interesting since I have been working on my own Garden of Eden twist lol -but your story is much better and involves animals; mine only involves people.

Very nice I look forward to reading more of your works because it is wonderful-the sentence structure is very well done, no purple prose, simple yet elegant. Very nicely done :)