Reviews for The Knight with the Stolen Kisses
shy-shan chapter 6 . 7/12/2013
i absolutely love this chapter...but plz update...i have been waiting sooooo long!
helenc chapter 5 . 9/4/2012
what happen? i haven't seen any updates from you? you on writers block or something?
Andy.T chapter 6 . 7/6/2012
LOVE IT! josh is so cute!

hope you can update it soon!

xxxx andy
renegade01 chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
cool chapter. wish it was longer as I started to get into it. summer is awesome...so long as your not stuck working... ;)
Adri Mars chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Hiya! I just read your entire fic so far today as I just started uploading a new fic myself. Being said that this fic is under the manga category the plot does sound familiar with many of shoujo manga I've read out there, but I also like strong-willed, independent-minded heroines like Rose (my fic also has a strong-willed, independent-minded heroine also) on play here.

Maybe I'm expecting too much but I hoped that there would be a lot more development, for example having some kind of a relationship with Charles in the long run before Rose figures out herself that he was simply playing her all this time. It would also be a lot of fun that way and that it would help bring down Dominic's morale as the first kiss-stealing sophomore.

And I like the adorable sibling relationship between Rose and Josh and how the little brother sees Dominic as some kind of a rival. Looking forward for more developments in your fic. :)

When you have time, hope you read mine also. (_)
Danielle-Liddell-In-Wonderland chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I enjoyed it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Nice Work!
sCaRfNiNjA chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I've been waiting forever for you to update! But yeah, I understand the need to be lazy all of a sudden.

I found this chapter the most amusing of all. I just love how Rose and Josh don't really see Dominic as a rival love interest. Josh is simply precious. He and Lily are my fav characters now.
mormonsrock chapter 6 . 6/25/2012
Omigosh, I absolutely LOVE this chapter!

I just love the introduction of all the new characters. _
zinsama chapter 5 . 5/23/2012
I'm totally envious of how you write. Please give me some of your skills /shot

And I want to see something evil happen to Amy. Hint hint nudge nudge!

Great story so far!
want to be deleted dont use chapter 5 . 5/14/2012
good keep going.
deadkitty1 chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
Aw~ They're so cute for each other! Her friend Lilly seems to be in on getting her friend together with Dominic. That should be fun! :)
renegade01 chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Nice analogy at the end there. ;)

Aww Dominic was sweet in this chapter...suspiciously sweet...
mormonsrock chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Haha... I REALLY love this chapter. I especially like the "one day" comments. "One day when he least expects it, a piano will fall on top of him." That one was my favorite. XD
renegade01 chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
Cute story. Charles is a douche. Can't wait for more. ;)
deadkitty1 chapter 4 . 2/1/2012
The chocolate was drugged. It had to be! hehe~

I'm disappointed that Rose didn't put up enough of a resistance against Dominic. I'm just yearning for some flirty arguments and avoidance from her since it seems now that Dominic is winning her affection. About Charles jerk move to leave her out in the rain; there seems to be no cause for that. He's never noticed her before until Dom's challenge and I actually thought that he might take her from him just to push it back in his face. Instead, he left her. There really is no other reason behind that. I'd like to think there is. I mean, Rose seems really picky about men and I'm sure she liked Charles for a reason. It's sad for her to admire someone who ended up being one of the men she hated the most.

I like the rushed plot, just slow it down at some parts. :) Can't have them falling for each other that fast, unless you have other things planned.
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