Reviews for The 13 Killings
mythical.stars chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Interesting plot. :) There were some punctuation and grammatical errors, but nonetheless really interesting. Hope you finish it!
Vivace.Assai chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
Good chapter again.

I'm curious just who this rich genius is and why he's holding Carissa prisoner, and I wonder what Carissa will do.

I can't wait to read the next chapter and see how you continue to develop this story.

Signing off...
Vivace.Assai chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Interesting premise. I'm very interested in seeing what will happen next and how this plot will continue, and as for the writing, there is always room for improvement (as with everybody) but the writing was pretty well done (regardless if it was your first story or not). I like how you started the chapter though - it really sucked the readers in.

Thanks for the interesting read!

Signing off...
Kirbygirl123 chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
You wrote pretty well for your first story! :D. You should continue it! _
Nintendo Fan 101 chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
So what will happen next?