Reviews for Dear Diary: Catching Santa
Kirbygirl123 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Hahaha this is funny. :P You should continue it (even though it's not Christmas yet). By the way, when saying dialogue, after it the first word doesn't always need to be capitalized, like this:

"Sure!" He said. - "Sure!" he said.
mythical.stars chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
I hope little kids who still believe in Santa didn't read this story. xD Btw "your" is possessive and "you're" is "you are." Some people really get peeved off when people make that mistake, so I thought I should warn you. (plus it might be in the decathlon, who knows?)