Reviews for Birth of the Seven
Jocelyn Hillcrest chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
This was very good! As far as the grammar-nazi is concerned, it was a bit comma-light; some sentences were run-on or harder to understand because they were in need of commas. But I really like the story and your writing style is good at including details without being overly descriptive (i.e., 'her golden hair shone in the sun as she shook her head' can get really old after it's third mention, but you avoided this while keeping the reader with a clear picture in their mind). I do believe that in your sentence, "Terrence was the one who had delivered the final bow..." that last word is meant to be "blow", but that was really the only thing that interrupted me, therefore it was the only spelling error I found. Great job, this is overflowing with potential and I think it would be easily publishable when finished with a little polishing. Again, great job!
Looking For The Hatter chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
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I LOVED THIS SOOOOOOO MUCH! I was expecting like a cool story and all, BUT NOT SOMETHING AS EPIC AS THIS. And a cool story, by my standards, is very hard to find. So, I already had high expectations for you, but this... Wow. This is... Fat Unicorns. That's what it is. It's that awesome. That's my new adjective for something this epic: Fat Unicorns.
C. R.Moroney chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This is a fascinating world you have created! I'll be keeping an eye out for more work from your world.