Reviews for into the belly of the whale
anachronistic chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
i like this. i didn't like it at first because it was so disconnected from one point to another but i've read it a couple more times and i like this. i think it grows on you. "i hope you do good i / hope you do me good child" is fantastic.

also, same formatting issue as last time? "remorse, regret / i hope you do good i" are singlespaced.