Reviews for Darcy and Spencer |
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![]() ![]() Hi, I really love this story. When are you going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is drama/romance, but I love Darcy's sense of humor and outlook on life. He is a funny guy. That contract stipulation at the end made me do a double take too. Just what type of crowd is Spencer running with in when playing as Susie Sweet. There is definitely something going on, plus it will be interesting if Darcy ever finds out how someone of her intellect and anti-social graces got into that type of industry. Thankfully a love of sports helped thaw some of the frost between them. Spencer obviously has some reason in which she wanted Darcy to be her roommate in an apartment that cozy. Maybe through the letters she found some measure of comfort with him that made her trust him to some degree more than she would trust anyone else. She is one complex lady. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I wonder who will be the first to break the rules now that they have reached an understanding. Spencer is an intriguing person. She obviously must have some enjoyment of doing adult entertainment, yet at the same time she has a vulnerability and fear of being touched. Looking forward to the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha, love it. I bet Darcy doesn't even realized he called Spencer 'Susie'. This is going to be a hilarious story. Certainly they are the odd couple. Living in a very close space it will be interesting to see how they interact and get to know each other. |
![]() ![]() I've reviewed this a few times before, but as the story continues, I feel like I have to reshare my thoughts. I absolutely love the story. I've been following it since the early chapters, maybe in the teens? The development of the characters and their interactions just seem so natural and expected without being obvious. I also love the development of the story line and how the characters are changing with events. As a writer, I find I struggle to find how my characters are changed with certain events, and I feel like you've done this so well, I almost feel like I know the characters personally. Wonderful writing, and fantastic rewrite as well. I look forward to either more edited/rewritten chapters or just another update. Thank you for sharing, Lizza |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me you're to continue this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS AMAZING STORY ! |
![]() ![]() Aaaaah! This chapter is chock full of foreshadowing and hints of new characters/developments. I'm super pumped for D&S's trip to the Hamptons-can't wait for the inevitable drama to unfold! There is one thing that I kind of question. Not that it takes away anything from the awesomeness of the story, and I'm sure this has been brought up before...Darcy mentions being the rebel Republican in an old Democrat family, but his parents stayed with the Romneys for Thanksgiving. I would have expected them to be family friends, or at least spend a family holiday with "friends" belonging to their own party. |
![]() ![]() Hey! Love the new chapter! I really like Cory and want to see more of him, he seems like him and spencer have such good potential chemistry as siblings and also a great interaction to play off of. I really like how Darcy had so much insight into why cory was there and kind of into potnetially the poepl who might be involved cuz he seems much more thoughtful and understanding now about spencers happennings than in the begining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After your long hiatus, this chapter was much appreciated by me, at least. I think you have developed the characters very well, and the story has been good this far! I feel that Spencer and Cory need to resolve their problems though. And I hate Michael being there in the same city as Darcy and Spencer. Just my thoughts lol |
![]() ![]() OMG im so looking forward to the talk between darcy and cory and for some reason I feel that something huge is going to go down in the next few chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter actually make me nervous too bcs Darcy/Hunter's nervousness has made Spence/Susie nervous, small regret when read that they have to fuck on scene. Also I'm kinda amazed and impressed how you could write, like, two different personality in one body, I mean, Spencer. How different she is when she's working and all, also how fragile she's yet trying to hide or standing strong with her secret. In my opinion, you write it beautifully. I really enjoy reading Darcy and Spencer, enjoy reading how they get accustomed with each other and all chapter by chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! It took me two days reading this story (until chapt 17) and I like it! I love Darcy & Spencer I found them adorable. I'm not a good reviewer so I just wanna say this chapter successfuly make my eyes glassy with barely-there-tears bcs poor Spencer she holds her secret all alone and how evil Michael and Chip are towards Spence! Gosh they're horrible :'(( anyway, keep the good work! Please pretty please finish the story I LOVE DarSpence! Have a nice day! |
![]() ![]() I really love the chemistry between them this is def one of my fav stories on FP! They just fit so well together and you can see how they changed together since they first met! can't wait for the update! :) |
![]() ![]() I like the soft and sensual, yet emotionally raw vibe of this chapter. I also think it's interesting that Spemcer chose to bring Cory with them. It should be very interesting to see how that plays out. |