|Reviews for Dixie|
| Lets Get Moderate chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
I really liked the ending, you had me going there thinking that Peter was the main character and then you killed him. Very cool indeed. Not so sure about one thing though, when you say "Yankee" do you mean American or a Union soldier?
If you mean a Union soldier then wouldn't it not make sense for him to be in Charleston since that's really close to the Confederate capital?
"and silent snores came from every location of the fort"
Something seems odd here, I might be getting picky but it seems like silent isn't the type of word to use here. Something like quiet might be better.