|Reviews for deAngelis: Resurrection|
| WithinWhimsy chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
Another great chapter, though a few mistakes:
She rubbed her face again with one hand, sighed, and withotu looking at Michael, said, "You're late."
All the feelign she had in ehr chest and stomach disappeared, leaving only a cold numbness behind.
but if I hae to go I want it to be pretty epic."
Hands shaking,s he pulled one more drag off of her cigarette
he was peeling her handsf rom her face
her voice low and rich with a hitn of an eastern accent.
Nothing a quick re-read couldn't fix. Well done and I look forward to future chapters.
| WithinWhimsy chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I have two habits:
1. Starting a review like this if the story I've read is good.
2. Reviewing the first chapter before I read more.
So putting two and two together you can perhaps guess my opinion. Your first chapter has left me fantastically confused and I can't wait to read more. I love both your style and concept and look forward to seeing more from this. Well done and keep writing!