|Reviews for White Magic|
| theblondebookworm chapter 93 . 8/7
I found this story at the end of 2020 and immediately fell in love with the beautiful story between Ardis and Capron, so much so that I re-read all 91 chapters numerous times the last few months of that year. I distinctly remember the excitement of getting the notification that this story was updated at the beginning of 2021, and I'm still here in the middle of 2022, re-reading the story about every other month. There's a reason I keep revisiting this story, and as another reviewer said, it's because we feel as though this is something special. If you ever decide to come back to this story, just know that I will still be waiting for however long you may need.
| heelenah chapter 10 . 1/3
Hi, I really like with the story even I'm not finished yet. But I can feel that you have great writing skill. anyway I want to give you an offer, but may I know your mailing acc? I will be glad that we can talk it at mail. Thank you so much
| B chapter 93 . 1/7/2021
NOOOOO ARDIS! Capron, you fool, save her! Go after her!
AH, I am so happy to have seen this update this morning. Taking a break from laundry was so worth it. I have been following this story since in infancy and would love to read more. Readers drop off from time to time, but I'm here for the long haul!
Keep up the good work and don't worry about any reviews. Keep your eyes on the next right thing.
| theDollophead chapter 93 . 1/6/2021
Yes I'm still here and still thinking about how your story will end! Don't forget me! After an entire decade I'm still not quitting you!
| Lakynn chapter 1 . 11/9/2020
This is incredible. I was hanging on every word, please tell me you are doing this as a profession!
| theDollophead chapter 92 . 8/31/2019
This story is something special and that's why I've followed it all these years.
Please know that however hard it is to write, you have at least one person waiting on the next chapter for however long it takes.
| B chapter 91 . 3/21/2019
Still checking back time to time for another chapter. ;)
| B chapter 91 . 12/8/2018
Ugh. This chapter is torture every time I read it. WHY. HE CANNOT MARRY THAT SILLY PRONCESS. He has to marry Ardis. And Ardis is dropping bombs everywhere. I really want the ending of this!
| B chapter 91 . 4/9/2018
Hopefully you feel motivated again soon! I want to know what Capron will do about this princess!
| B chapter 91 . 6/19/2017
That was delicious. Can I have more? There are so many variables of danger. How is she going to survive this? Intrigued! Emensely!
| Guest chapter 91 . 6/8/2017
I wake up and InkedGirl has posted a new WM chapter?! One where Torin is finally gtfo? Best day ever.
| Geeyeahyeah chapter 90 . 5/28/2017
I love this story. I'm still following it!
| AJ Garcia chapter 90 . 5/4/2017
I literally screamed when I saw this update in my email. Where have you been? Can I just say this was a very good and well-written chapter. Deafiantely worth the wait. It made me so happy to see that Ardis has her body back. It's also really want my heart to know that Capron knew it was her, without her even being in her own body. He will always find her and I love that. Is there any chance that will have another chapter soon? I'm willing to wait for this one. This has been one of my favorite stories on fiction process. He will always find her and I love that. Is there any chance that will have another chapter soon? I'm willing to wait for this one. This has been one of my favorite stories on fictionpress. Ardis is so sacrificial, I hope Capron keeps her from leaving. Please let them be together! They need each other! Capron isn't Capron without her!
All right, now let's go back to how he recognized her. Was it her eyes? Can he see her spirit? And he sends her mind still as a person who has mind communicated with her? I have so many questions and I cannot wait for this next chapter. Can I daresay that you have grown as a writer? This has to be the best chapter you have written thus far. Are you taking the writing classes? I didn't find one grammatical mistake. Job well done!
| B chapter 90 . 5/4/2017
Ahhhhhh! AHHHHHHHH! She's alive and back in her body! WHAT GLORY! WHAT GRACE! My world is all and good again. Thanx for the chapter! Are we close to the end or are we in store for some more of your wonderful writing?
| Kaito Yokushini chapter 90 . 5/4/2017
AMAZING STORY! Plz update as soon as you can i cant get enough of this!