Reviews for White Magic |
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![]() ![]() Ardis! Ardis! Ardis! Tough luck on your NaNo story:( Sometimes it's hard to get the words to flow. But I have faith in you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! An update! Very happy to see this chapter! I hope you write more soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice to see Capron finally falling in love with Ardis :) It's December now...update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can totally sympathize about NaNoWriMo... So much typing! I love this story though, it is brilliant, so many twists! Sorry if anything is misspelled, iPhone autocorrect is screwy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um, um... How are you going to break the curse on Capron? I want them to get married, have a couple of babies, and live happily ever afterrr! |
![]() ![]() FINAL CHAPTERS? What? But this story is so short! Wait... no, it is like 66 chapters... Well, it felt short! Hahaha, I like where things are going:) The climax seemed perfect for me, but that is just me! I was so caught up in the moment, it worked. Yay! I am not the only one doing NaNoWriMo! Goodluck, girlfriend! Can't wait till December! |
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![]() ![]() Okay good lol I got worried it was over! You did good :) and can't wait to read your next update in dec! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on the new chapter! I look forward to the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, super Ardis :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() just the first chapter and I LOVE this (*0*) |
![]() ![]() What is she going to dooo? Put them to sleep? Turn them into bubbles? Transport them? What? Alright, it would really be nice if I could just shut up and let you tell me what is goin to happen next, right? ... ... ... Yeah, not gonna happen. Goodness so much happened in this chapter! The fact that she got them to stop for a few minutes was impressive to say the least. The fact that Capron spoke to here a few times with his mind made me smile. I relish every time he is caring with her. I am really upset with the knights and the magicians. I don't want either side to win. War is an ugly thing. There was a reason why women were not aloud to fight in the older days. *Shivers* The fact that Capron watched her spazzing out made me almost laugh. Yes, I think he will take good care of her in the future. But, what did she mean when she said that he knew what must be done? WHAT IS SHE DOING? Please update before I send Homeland Security after you. What? The fact that you are withholding important information is truly criminal! |
![]() ![]() Pleaseeeee update soon! |
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![]() ![]() asdfghjkl please update soon! I LOOOOOVE your story 3 C'est le cliffhanger! |