I liked the sense of chaos, but there were points that made it hard to understand. Such as,

"You bitch," he snarled.

"Such wondrous words coming from a man who allows the woman he loves to come to an early death," she responded. "But I digress. It would be most welcome for you to agree to these terms."

"As long as she isn't harmed."

"Of course."

Ardis shook her head. "No. You can't do that. How can you trust her after all this?"

"So is that a 'yes', then, dear Prince?"

"Yes."

I had a hard time figuring out who said what. Who called her a B? And was it Capron who said "of course"? And did he mean Ardis when he was bargaining that "she" wouldn't be hurt? Things like that make me really confused... But, on the bright side, it was full of suspense! Loved it, as always:)

P.S. Just to clarify, Osra is dead, right?

P.P.S. You can always add more detail. The only parts that seemed really vague (to me) were those where they were dragged before Nadia. How were they dragged, did they fight it, did they protest? I would also like to know everyone's expressions in times like this, but that is just my personal preference.

P.P.P.S. (last one (promise)) Never let the fear of "my work isn't good enough" keep you from writing. You have talent, don't hide it in the closet!

Ah, I always love it when you write in Capron's point of view. I love getting his insights on the situation or his and Ardis's relationship from time to time!
I don't really get what's happening with Ardis and Nadia at the end...kind of confused. Sorry I guess I'll just wait for the next chapter to find out heh. Thank you so much for this update! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Great job on this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens in the next one! :)

This is going to be a long review.

I wanted to let you know that you did an amazing job on this chapter, I started to review this chapter on my phone and when I was going to email what I had written so far to myself I deleted it x.x ugh. I do know what I had said but I felt I wrote it better there, oh well. You did a great job with giving the end a sense of chaos, but perhaps it was a bit too chaotic, it is almost confusing how chaotic it is, but if you made sure to clear up what happens at the end of this chapter, somehow, these feelings you are invoking definitely convey the way Ardis' was feeling, "chaos of emotions", how (just making guesses here) her mind was spinning but she knew what was finally happening, that she felt she failed, or whatever you want to make it. It is really only a problem because you end the chapter on a note that seems to stop almost mid sentence. But if you do something to address that it's fine.

Another thing I wanted to let you know is the feeling of complete and utter dread, I got at the end of Capron's POV. It was something that I don't get even when reading some famous authors who supposedly are the best of the best, so kudos. It is a truly hard thing to do, and I wanted to make sure you knew you did it and did it well. I had the feeling that Capron was about to do something selfless, and possibly completely stupid, for Ardis, and we all know that is not like him at all.
When i first read the a/n you had at the end of the chapter, I thought you were saying this was the end of the story, but then i realized you are asking if the end was confusing or not. If you were to finish the story here I think you would have many confused readers going, say what!? But I don't believe that is what you are doing, it doesn't seem to be you style, and there are quite a few plot points that haven't been addressed directly yet.
I'll end my review by saying that not understanding your own character's seems to be a common thing among writers, or at least I get that impression from quite a few published ones, it's what make you keep writing about them, to figure them out, it's a journey and your readers are right there with you following along.

Sending tons of love your way,
Sarah/Blondiej1

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! i hope Ardis and Capron end up together

Im loving this! Keep up the good work! You are doing great! Can't wait to read this entire story! :3

They have to make it! They cant die now!

I thought the saying was "Pancakes are love"? Well, I wasn't expecting this as chapter 61, but sometimes you just need a good filler chapter. Question! Can Capron read her thoughts as she reads his? Or is it a one-way thing?

That is our Ardis, always on task. Man, they were about to have a moment!

LOVED IT! can't wait for the next chapter!

Big Love for the update! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Great job on another chapter! I hope they can find a way out of their situation. Can't wait to read more! :)

I like this story please keep writing.

Please, please, please write something from Capron's POV! I want to know how he's doing! He's my favorite character :) Or at the very least give us a hint about how he feels about Ardis! Please!?

UPDATE SOON

I liked it, and I want you to update soon please!