Ten points for the long chapter! YAya! The drama is kicking back up again! *Does a little dance* Oh yeah, Ardis got to fight Nadia, oh yeah! It matters little that she won *waves hand* but the important factor is that she finally used SOME magic. Brownie points all the way! It is really sad that only Felix has faith in her, but even THAT is wavering... *Sighs* I really like that they did not know what Nadia's full plan was, because that is much more realistic than, *points* "I know your plan, villain! It is A and then B, in that order!"
And then the bad guy is all, "My, that is absolutely correct!" That plot is too used and, frankly, is hard to believe. No one can know a crazy person's plan to the T. You did great! Love it! The detail was good. UPDATE!

You are an exceptional writer. I was literally crossing my fingers hoping that you updated and you did! I can't wait for the next chapter and for Capron to come back to us! :D

enjoyed it keep it up

i loved it, i want the ending to be happy! :( i love Ardis and Capron together and i hope something more happens between them!

I really enjoyed the chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)

Ah, this is so good! Keep up the great work! :)

WHAT IN ALL THAT IS BLOODY?! What is this? Why would she follow? Gah! This plan is getting worse by the second (no offense, Ardis)! Whaaa! I need to know what is going on! UPDATE!

Interesting! :)

keep it up :)

Please hurry and update again soon, I'm dying to know what'll happen next!

Another wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)

Great job on this! Update soon, please :)

Do I sense a brother-to-brother fight coming on? I guess we shall see jusr how "much" Captron cares for our Ardis. :) Felix wouldn't let the boys kill Ardis, right? I just want to know how good of a friend he is... I like him, but not when he is sad. T.T I wanna cry when Felix is sad... DON'T BE SAD! Whaaa! Okay, now that i am done acting like a baby monkey, I shall continue! *points forward!* I was so excted when I realized that she was going to tell them. Torin took it a lot better than I thought, as well. But he considers her the enemy... We shall see how he treats her now! *Screams* I, for one, do NOT like the idea of Torin being alone with Ardis! He could leave her for dead! Dead! Death! Boom! Bang! UPDATE!

Too lazy to log in but pleeeeease update soon :) I love your story and I can't wait to see where this goes !

such a short chapter ); but i'm glad Felix is displaying a few of his old characteristics. and ardis having a little fun at katrina's expense. hah! that girl deserved it. still don't know how i feel about torin though. hmm...thank you for this update!