Great job on this chapter! I can't wait to read more! :)

Poor thing she really needs to stand up for herself and soon she isn't a pushover and that's what she is acting like... stand up!
Much love,
Sarah
Blondiej1

Must know what happens next!

Woo I love updates of this story! Great chapter, and I am looking forward to seeing all this is going to play out!

i was so very much enjoying katrin and adris' little confrentation! that was brilliant and i have to say i cant wait for torin to find out the truth about adris...

im sought of dissapointed thati have to wait so long between chapteers :( i have to reread the past chapters. bu thats ok because i LOVE THE STORY!

keep up the good work

I have been reading your story for a while. I am enjoying it and can't wait until you post more. I am excited to see where the rest of this story goes and I hope good will win in the end. :)

Smart one Ardis :)

Man, this story is just... wow. Amazing.
Can't wait for the ending! But then again it'll be sad when it's finished too :(
Keep it up! This is fantastic stuff :)

cool

And the plot thickens

Ah, you did such a great job on this! I am so anxious for more. Please update soon!

you NEED to post the next part soon lol I just read this whole story today... and I'm dying to know what'll happen next ahh! huuuuuurrrrrrrrryyyy! :)

Bwaaa! Capron is no killer! T_T At leatst, i hope not. It would make sense- but capron is different now! Man, the plot thickens... it is so think that you could slice it with a butter knife! O_o I am always waiting for your updates! :) I can always count on them!

Ugh! I am so ready for Ardis to put Torin in his place! To make him see that she has a brain! Capron will be king, won't he? Help me! I do not know what is going to happen next! (*stares at her email, waiting for an update*)

I'm not sure if I believe Torin. But he could be telling the truth.
Anyway, I'm really excited now. The battle cries draw closer. Update soon!

i loved it! update soon! im hoping the ending will be happy not sad :(