Ahhhh! I hope you get your flare back soon! But I love this chapter nontheless. I really want Ardis to be there when Capron is told what she is! Whaaa! She should have told him when she had the chance! Well, I can't wait to see how she gets out of this one. They have to tavel together? Well, this can'r be too bad...right? ehhh... UPDATE SOON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Oh, and I am glad that you have over 130 reviews) But I feel this story should have so many more. But please don't be gone for too long! *makes a heart with her hands* you are a great writer!

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they did seem a bit out of character..but it was refreshing to see them soften towards one another..I think both Ardis and Capron pulled it off :)

i'm reviewing after a long time..and there have been great many developments. I like Capron very much. He's unpredictable and really cool. I don't have the exact word for him..I'll go with mysterious for now. That just makes him all the more appealing :)

Ah, ok, the last line explains a lot.

Get your spark back pelase!

THIS CHAPTER IS SO SHORT ITS A DISGRACE TO BOOKS WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY.

Really great chapter. I like Katrin's character, even though she was frustrating/annoying to begin with. I just don't understand what the snap was (maybe i skipped a line where it explained it?). Also, I really like the idea of the King Capron/Torin not actually having powers but using his slave guy to do it for him. That's so funny and clever, and something he would do for sure!

I have no problem with cliff hangers, but it seems they've all ended with her getting hit in the head and blacking out. She'd be brain-damaged by now! lol. But yeah, some change in endings would be cool.

this is sooo so so great. The characters are unique, likable but not perfect, and well-written. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this story, into the backstories and all the details. I really believe this world you've created.

I love this but I totally wanted this FOR SO LONG its seriously been torture.

This is awesome! Please keep updating! I thought Ardis and Capron weren't that out of the character...except for the whole abandoning his aunt part :( PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)

I loved this chapter!

I really love this story. I always read it at night on my ipod and it's a big hassle to type on that thing so I haven't reviewed, but I am enjoying this so much. Your writing really suits the "era" (even though there isn't really one seeing as it's fantasy), and I like the characters a lot.

It was good! Happy nBirthday too :D Hope you mom likes this

A very happy birthday to you then! Again, wonderful update, and I have to say that the little fluffy moment at the end of the chapter was very sweet .. Also, I wish you luck on your mother reading your story, and I have to say that I'm sure she'll love it as much as I do, or more so since she is your mother. I can't wait till the next chapter, and I'll waiting on edge till then!