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Whoa. Nice lead-up to the climax of the story.

Good disguise, Nadia. Creepy knowledge.

*Please* use magic, Ardis! I *really* want to see what Capron's reaction is...

Does Nadia know about Ardis' magic?

Saving him for something special... the Eremite's fruit (again)?

If everyone is going after the Eremite's fruit, I think you should explain it more... i.e. Harry Potter Horcrux, Eragon Vault of Souls

Keep going!

-MathNerd3141

Another word; NOW

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One word; UPDATE

OH NO! Ardis! Ardis! Stop her! Stop her! Don't let her take him awaaay! *snaps around to face you* did you really have to leave it there? Now I want to know what is going on more than anything! Please update soon!

And how does Ardis know that terrible woman? I want to end her right now. Can we kill her? Please? Well, at least have Ardia scare her within an inch of her life and I will be a happy camper) Capron does not know what to do with her. How cute! I wonder though... When this witch was showing how much she knew, why did she not point out that Ardis was a magician? Or maybe she did not know? Ardis is the definition of a "closet magician" though, so I would not be surprised. Gah! Tell me what happens next! I feel like a five-year-old that's not getting its cookie! Oh. cookie... That sounds really good right now... *walks away to the kitchen*

Nice twist!

For a moment there though, I was so scared that Nadia would list out that Ardis was a magician (considering that she had listed out who Capron and Callana were). But she didn't so that kind of quelled my fears. And then, she demanded to have Capron, and now, once again, you've gotten me nervous.

I like how you switched POV to Capron. It let me understand him better as a person, and it definitely helped further the development.

As for the updates, it's perfectly okay. Understandably your life is busy, so I'll be fine with any update schedule as long as it works for you.

Also: congratulations on the 100 reviews! You and this story totally deserve it.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful chapter!

Signing off...

AHHHHHH! I knew there was something wrong with that little girl! And yay! A chapter from Capron's point of view is a nice change. I like to say as always, you deliver a nice chapter. I look forward to the next one.

What a twist I did not expect!

And Ardis with her little 6th sense...hmmm... and Callana...

Well, I cant wait for next weekend then :D or umm, this weekend then :P

Hmmm I wonder why Felix was so keen to stay with Capron's hunt for magicians, considering Felix's sister was a magician.

And who is this Sora? I wonder. Ardis hates her but Callana can't see through the girl...neither can Capron and he seems savvy.

Ahhh! Well hurry up anyway! This is gettig interesting! Was Ardis about to tell him?

oooooh good chapter, as always. I just love how Adris is feeling, and I don't like the little girl either. Her name Sora, sounds similar to Zorra, it means fox in Spanish. As in, sly as a fox. I look forward to the next chapter!

No update until next weekend? That kind of makes me sad, but I understand that you must be busy and have a lot going on with your life. But, anyways, going back to the review.

So, the girl might be evil? Oh... that's not going to be good. I should have see it coming, but I didn't. I am scared though, since the girl definitely seems innocent... so, it might take awhile until the other two get suspicious like Ardis... This plot is really getting intense. I don't know what's going to happen, but you've definitely got me worried. This story can be a pretty engrossing read, since it gets you sucked into the story and what is happening to the characters.

Once again, I loved the scene between Ardis and Capron. Their scenes together are always written really nicely. Learning the truth about Felix's sister was rather sad, but seeing the explanation for Capron's hatred of magic was very understandable and slightly poignant. Yes, the scene between the two was poignant.

This story is definitely an enjoyable read, and I enjoy every minute of it. Thanks for sharing this!

Signing off...

I really am happy that they are finally getting to the dust lands!

Hey! This is a lovely story, with a good sense of adventure, and Ardis is a very sympathetic character. I've been reading through from the beginning, and then I got to this chapter and winced.

They cauterized an arrow wound? Nixon decided it'd be a better idea to sear her flesh rather than just dry his clothes out and rip off part of his shirt for a bandage? I mean, cauterization is generally used only in cases of severe hemorrhage, like amputating a limb. Leaving a burn is painful and can get infected as well, if it blisters. And she carried that injury around for a while without bleeding out, so it doesn't seem necessary.

That detail just made me want to yell at the characters for a moment-poor Ardis! It's a great story, though, I may be a little nitpicky. I'm really looking forward to reading through the rest of the chapters! It's kind of like finding a treasure trove when you come across a good story with plenty of updates, isn't it?