| Reviews for White Magic |
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  B chapter 81 . 8/7/2013 BEAUTIFUL! Wonderful update! I will be waiting eagerly for more. :) |
| Ms Julia chapter 81 . 8/6/2013 Yay you updated I was getting worried there that you might not! Can't wait for your next update :) |
| Guest chapter 81 . 7/31/2013 Nice! Update stat! :) |
 Wendy Thompson135th chapter 81 . 7/31/2013 Then again, he was never one to thing too far ahead. -possibly a simple typo. Wrong, in any case. "What is it?" He swore and started running again. -who is speaking and who is running? Poorly referenced pronouns; names needed. But just as the condolences left her, -condolences don't fit the rest of the sentence. Not sure what you mean here, but check a dictionary for a definition. "Why did she disappear?" He asked the Prince, -and dialogue tag sentence problems. |
| 1supergirl4 chapter 81 . 7/30/2013 I enjoyed this chapter. You did a wonderful job! I look forward to reading more! :) |
| B chapter 80 . 7/20/2013 Totally waiting for another update, but don't feel pressured to write if you can't. If you are feeling stuck, something that works for any creative person is to write your firsts thoughts in the first morning. This exercise will help unblock you and get the creative juices flowing. Gotta do it for days though, for it to work well. :) Just an idea. |
| B chapter 80 . 6/30/2013 How in the world did I miss this update? Love it. Please write more someday soon! |
| theDollophead chapter 80 . 6/7/2013 oooh it's so good - was Capron able to reckon her? It wasn't clear. aahhhhh update soon, okay? You don't update enough! |
| PandoraHelene chapter 4 . 6/7/2013 Hey, I have to say I am enjoying your story so far. Although I almost had a heart attack when I read the girl's name is Imara hahaha I'm working on a story and my main character's name is Amara hahaha close one. Good work, you carry the story along well, not too much and not too little too. |
| Simbeswore chapter 80 . 6/7/2013 Finally! An update after a month! I do continue to support this story but like I said before the end seems to be dragging out although this chapter did hold the plot and was yet again a cliffhanger. I hope the updates are more frequent now. :) :) Have a nice day! |
| Ms julia chapter 80 . 6/7/2013 Oh wow, you NEED to update this now. At this very second. |
| 1supergirl4 chapter 80 . 6/6/2013 Oh I hope everything turns out alright. Great job on this chapter! I can't wait until you update again! :) |
| Aria Faccia chapter 79 . 5/23/2013 I just spent the last few days reading this... my brain is melting but I just wanted to say that I really like this story! I look forward to reading the next chapter and cannot wait for it. :D |
| orangecandyy chapter 79 . 5/9/2013 wow, ardis really is getting a good handle on her magic. but i have a really bad feeling about that drink torin gave her. it's like he knows who she is...omg i hope he didn't poison her and felix...oh felixsuch a sweet kid. thank you for the update! i'm really looking forward to the next one! |
| karin chapter 79 . 5/9/2013 I JUST WANT CAPRON AND ARDIS TOGETHER! :'( |