i love this story but is moving so slowly... the updates are getting further and further apart. I love this story though and plan on reading until the end I just hope you can find the time to update quickly.

Nice chapter but a little confusing here and there. You're going good but it seems like you are dragging the end in these short chapters.

The woman of many faces? I'm going to be super upset if you don't update again asap

YOU UPDATED! *Hugz!* I loved it! can't wait to see what capron will do!

good but way to short

Another wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read more! :)

Update! ASAP please :)

Nice to see many new chapters up since I last read this one! I must say...Ardis seems to have the worst luck ever. Sad to see her as a servant again after all she has done. I hope you make her stronger. Capron seems to be a bit of an ass, and I'm having a hard time picking up on his attraction to Ardis. If anything, it seems like she is the one clinging on to him...which is never attractive. I hope that changes soon though! This story is riveting. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Transition from last chapter to this one seemed a bit clumsy and a bit confused. I need yo be reminded of some of these alliances and where they're headed. I'm just getting old.

Her frequent black outs could be attributed to her getting acclimated to her magic; like a learning curve. As she becomes more adept at using and controlling the magic the blackouts should decrease. These make it more believe able.

Sorry for being MIA! But I am sooo happy with this chapter, you have no idea. :) I can understand what you mean. I am currently writing some personal work and i am so close to finishing, but there is a piece of the ending that is missing. The last thing you want to do is force the ending... Wait until you can see it in your head before you make the jump. I am cheering for you over here! (*waves arms*)
And I can't believe that Capron is marrying that girl. Well, I can, but that is not the point. The point is that he is supposed to marry Ardis. Felix can woo and marry the princess (that I am OK with). It would also be nice for Ardis and Capron to have a nice long talk, but I am guessing that you are saving that for the climax.
Is Ardis ever going to tell him? Not yet.
Is Capron ever going to tell her that he loves her? Starting to look like a no...
Can they still mind communicate? Apparently not? Wow...
Where in the world is Felix? Check. We found him!
Will Ardis ever kiss Capron? More like punch him.
How much of Adis' magic is being drained? Check.
Will she still be able to protect him? We shall see.
Will she lose her powers completely? Still up for debate.
Will they get married? I have enough hope for all of us!
How much worse can this really get? ...no comment.

But, like I said, I will be cheering for you! Get out of that peanut butter and into some real nice butter. Did that even make sense? Anyway, I am hoping to hear from you soon. And if you need suggestions, just ask:) You will find the ending yet!

Good

I get confused when you talk of other towns.
Too complicated of a discussion.
Simplify it.

Exciting!

WHAT. IS. HAPPENING! That's it, the world is gonna end. I knew it! He is going to marry her! I was a little confused form the jump here, 'Ardis flinched when something clattered to the ground from the bottom of the staircase. A woman cursed and with a great deal of commotion, managed to pick it back.

Her mind wandered and she saw him and his stormy gray eyes, pleading with her, angry with her. She couldn't understand the stones rolling within her stomach, the emotions that played with the muscles on her face.' But it put some drama in there. I understood it after I read it a few times:)