Reviews for An Oliver Twist
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
it is a very good story!
Du chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
This was so sweet and light-hearted! You have a knack for making extremely appealing male characters. The story made me smile, and feel really cold... It was perfectly well written, as always. But what can I say, I'm a fan. Cheers! :)
Runninginside chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
Great little short story. I loved every moment. It felt real with everyone's annoyances and reactions. Perfectly done.
Strange dawn chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
LOVE IT. I don't know what I'm going to do now that I've read everything you've written... *Sigh*
hirokiri9 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
I'm clearly missing your updates on ricochet and realized I never read this one! So far, all your stories are so similar yet different. The feeling and essence that resonates from your writing encompasses all of these wonderful stories. I think I will always continue to follow your work, because I've yet to find an author similar to you. I truly hope that you publish one day. It would probably make me more happy than you. XD Keep up the amazing work!
Edna-Mode413 chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
One badass one shot ;)
Beeskeez chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
Couldn't be bothered signing in to review because I'm super lazy.

I think your writing was fantastic, I thought you captured the scenes really well and your characters came off as very authentic and real which is hard to find and I really appreciated that.

The only thing I struggled with was that Chris kind of came off as just generically bad and it would've been nice to see some hints of why she was with him in the first place, which I never really got. Like it would've been nice to see why they were together and what she used to like about him, so he seemed more like a real person than just an obstacle to Gen and Oliver being together.

But over all I thought it was wonderful, and beautifully written. Well done :)
Bee
JenWriting chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Look you are a really good writer but I have to say that I just couldn't finish this.
I am Irish and it was painful to read what Oliver was saying. Irish guys just don't speak like that. No 'lassie' only occasional ye's and that's usually old men and completely depends where you're from and for the love of god they only say 'aye' up the north. He sounds more Scottish. It's so overdone.
Also if he's supposedly been in America for three years then how could he not know what lucky charms are? You don't have to have been in america to know that.
I just needed to get that off my chest. Honestly you're a good writer and in the future you should just stick to what you know or research better.
P.S. The mere mention of leprechauns makes all Irish people groan in anger.
Person chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Awww- oh great! Now you got me fawning ovre ye irishmen! Oh well... I would've enentually! Thank you lassie!
Incandescently Chelsea chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Aww, I loved this! It was beautiful and sweet and cute!

Thank you so much for this piece of wonderful fiction! I really enjoyed the journey. :)

Chelsea Elizabeth
Nikki Oly chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
OMG.

I.
Love.
This.

Thank you for sharing!
anony27 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
I'll say it plainly: you've written a guy with a Scottish accent- not an irish one (lassie, och, aye etc.). And as much as I tried to like it, I couldn't.
JustAMemory chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
I actually read this a few months ago - right around the New Year, actually. Very appropriate. Some stories stick with a person, and this was one of them for me. In particular, I find myself thinking a lot about the scene when Gen and Oliver go to get some wood, as well as the early morning scenes between them. Just a really well written, interesting story that I really enjoyed a lot.
Totes Awsome Sauce chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Love it great job!
luzanima chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
I can see why this was nominated for and won so many awards! You manage to capture so much in this short story. I had been reading 'Vertigo' but went to your author profile to find other works of yours to read while I wait for the update :) This definitely did not disappoint!
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