So... This is just a story with no proper beginning, no main plot, no proper planning, no theme, and NO PROPER ENDING. I'm actually wondering right now if this could even get worse. It isn't so great to just throw in characters out if nowhere way off the beginning, and it is never good to throw in very irrelevant scenes that you don't plan on fixing up to have it looj like at the very least some product of writer's block. You also left a lot of loose ends, dearie. Not a lot if people like that. You write out of your own style.

I think you should make a Sequel, maybe not as long as this one but still a sequel with maybe 10-15 Chapters? But, the sequel could be about when Gabriel comes back. I think it would be cool, because this Story ended with William & Charley, why can't a sequel be about Gabriel and Charley?
Even though my ship didn't end up together I was okay, probably because you didn't specify that William & Charley end up together. I loved the Story, the Journey I had reading it, I'm actually going to start reading Ice Cream Cravings, cause I enjoyed this Story but now that I think about it you did do William & Charley together... I kid, I kid.
I really hope there's a Sequel even if you finished this Months ago, I'm still holding out hope (sad, I know). But to all those Fan's of Gabriel & Charley I am gonna write my Idea of if they got together down in this review. I hope the Author doesn't mind.

It's been a Year since Vanessa's Death and me a Justin decided to to visit where she left us. It was sad, but not as bad as the last time. This Year has been good for us, Justin healed from Vanessa, but she will always have a place in his Heart for her. Me, well I dated William for 7 Months until we both called it quits. I don't regret it though, because it finally helped push aside the feelings I had for him, and now I don't have to worry about 'What if'. The first few Months were really good but, after awhile it didn't work, and we were both just unhappy. He started to look at other Girls, I started to look at other Guys.. but we tried the last 2 Month's. We just weren't meant to be. I actually hooked him up with Maria, she was hesitant at first, but they seem to be really into each other now.
Then there's Gabriel, he sent me letters, and told me how his Life was, then one day 3 Month's after he left, there was a letter with his E-Mail address, he said he finally got access to the Internet, and that I can E-Mail him if I wanted to. I was nervous at first, because it had been so long, but I really wanted to talk to him. So I did. We started messaging each other almost everyday, or at least I did, he would some times miss a few days due to work. It was really scary for me sometimes because I was worried one day he just wouldn't reply. But it all worked out in the end.
I was still talking to him now, I told him everything. About Vanessa, Justin and even about me and William. I was nervous too at first, but he said he understood, but that if he saw me again he still wouldn't hesitate to kiss me.
We got really close after that. I would tell him about myself, and he opened a lot too. it made me happy because he was opening up to me finally.
It wasn't until one day, that there was a knock on the door, I was on the couch doing some school work, slightly surprised. I wasn't expecting anybody.
I went to open the door, to the one and only Gabriel.
''Hello, love.'' he said with a slight smirk.
I was in shock for a moment, but then my face was replaced with a huge grin.
''Gabri-'' I wasn't even able to finish saying is name, because his lips were on mine. He was serious about kissing me when he saw me. I kissed him back, and then his hands made they're way to my waist. I put my arms around his neck, he moved forward enough so that he could close the door with a kick of his foot backwards. Keeping his lips on mine through out. After what felt like hours he let go to breathe, he pressed his head against mine, while we were both taking in deep breaths.
I could sense he was about to say something but I cut him off by kissing him again. In between kisses, I said. ''I missed you.'' he would reply saying ''I missed you too.''. We went like that for a long time, and we ended up in my room. On my bed. We probably would have gone further was it not for hearing Justin's voice from the front Door.
I had asked what made Gabriel came back later, he said he always wanted to come back, but with the gang on the look out he couldn't. He said how he turned them in to the Police anonymously about they're whereabouts a Months ago and that most of the Gang went to Jail due to all the charges made against them. Then he came back.
Gabriel and I started dating after that, but decided not to get too serious, like we did that day, I could see it pained him, and to be completely honest it pained me too.
We were together for 2 and a half years until we decided not to be Girlfriend and Boyfriend anymore, but Husband and Wife. Everyday after that were the best day's of my Life. We got married 7 Months later. Justin is still over-protective of me, even after I got married to Gabriel. Especially after I got Pregnant, when I had to go to a Male Doctor, he insisted on someone else, but I said he was ridiculous because he was the best baby Doctor there. He even said to stay in the same room with me as I got checked up, with his back turned toward me of course.
But Life was good. My Mom met a Guy, Justin fell in love with a Girl and William and Ashley were still going on strong after a couple of break ups.
Life was good, and even though I had to go through a lot of bad to get there, I never regretted it.

Okay, I hope you didn't mind my ending CupCake34. it turned out much more then I thought it would be. But, I did it anyways. Hope you don't mind... It made me at peace, maybe it could do the same for others :)
Also I may be the only one, but I thought Ashley & William or Maria & William would end up together if Charley & William didn't. I thought Maria was better choice cause it seemed like she had a loose end too, even if she wasn't alway's in the Story.
Thank you for creating this Story, because I loved it!

Aww. I loved this Chapter! But I don't want it to be the last of Gabriel!

This was an interesting Chapter, I liked it a lot because it showed us Readers a softer side of William. My thoughts of him haven't changed that much, I still find him rather annoying (lol), but it was sweet to see that he didn't like the 'new' her. Because in a way he's always wanted her to be like that, a partier, someone to easily make out with, more daring I guess. But at the same time was making her someone he didn't like.
I really want to see more of Gabriel!

I think Charley's new attitude is Okay, I just don't want her to change where you can't even recognize her though. But I do like her new attitude!
I can't wait to see more of Gabriel! We might actually get something out of him!

These past few Chapters have really taught me a few things, about William & Gabriel.
William and Charley can have fun together, but I feel they're bad for each other, when things go wrong William goes to Girls for comfort, Charley drinks and would probably end up sleeping with a Guy too because of it. Also when William forced Charley to go to his Aunt's Wedding, I was so mad at him! Some may say that it's good for her to have somebody to push her to do things, and she might turn out to like it, but I found it to be rude, and Charley was such a pushover that I wanted to slap some sense into her! I just overall don't find anything special about them either. William needs someone to inspire him to be better, Charley isn't that. Charley also needs someone who can be there for her, but also someone who can inspire her to be good as well.
Now on to Gabriel. Gabriel & Charley can have a good time as well, we might not have seen it fully, but they're there for each other, each others anchors. Gabriel finds Charley inspiring (as said in the last Chapter) to be a better Person, he just needs to let her in.
Also I think Gabriel is a good influence on Charley, he told her it wasn't good to drink, but that backfired a bit when he did. BUT, it was his Sisters Death Anniversary. I think he just needs someone like Charley to help him not go into his dark abyss of his.
There is this problem about Gabriel, where he pushes her away, which is the Con about him, but I think if they got over that they could be happy.
Just my opinion. I love the story so far, but I'm worried about Charley in the next Chapter. I guess I will just have to go an read.

I am loving the interactions between Gabriel & Charley! Also finally Charley's Mom broke it off with Frank! I never liked him that much in the first place.
I'm excited for the next Chapter!

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. We really got some where with Charley & Gabriel. We learned that he can be really sweet, and that eh does like her ;)
You made me love him more! Or officially love him. Can't wait to see more of this! 33

Ugh, I can't believe William! honestly he has the 'right' to do what he wants, but he did it on Charley's 'bed' so that she would see it. I think he wants her jealous, but he's only getting hurt and more mad at him. Wow, I hate him...
I love Justin & Charley's Relationship, they have a good one. :)

I liked this Chapter, it was okay. I just don't like Charley's feelings for William... :P
Hopefully we will see more of Gabriel, and maybe see a more fun side, maybe? I wonder what it would be like to have Gabriel & William in the same room together, it would be interesting to compare the feelings she has for both of them.
Oh, and William was so annoying in this Chapter (sorry, guys!), when he was like 'You are going on a Date with me.' it got me so upset! I literally wanted to punch him, slap him multiple times again and again! I was wanted to jump into the Computer scream so badly. UGH. I've always hated Guy's who did that. And I noticed I wasn't even slightly a Charley & William shipper/fan.
I just don't like them together. SORRY. Because if you want them to be together in the end... then it must suck to know someone dislikes them.
But I can't also help but feel that, William might like Charley and may feel she is a challenge but I doubt he has really intense feelings, the way he's treating her... like I said, if he were real, he would be slapped to the pummel. Just sayin.
I want more Gabriel! I can't decide which ship names are better though, Gabley, Chabriel? Yeah... I'm dead serious about my ship...
P.S. If they don't end up together, I will be immensely depressed... no I'm only kidding, but I would be sad, but I would understand that we have creative differences and etc.
But I'm going to read more before I start babbling cause who knows I could change my mind :)
Maybe.

EEK! I loved this Chapter! I love how comfortable and safe Charley is with Gabriel, it's also amusing that she feels safe with him, when he's 'dangerous' like. Haha.
I loved how she seems to have a slight attraction and it's getting me all giddy! Gabriel at least cares for her, which I also enjoy.
I'm so excited to see more of him!
I can't wait to see how things will develop! :D

This was a good Chapter, with William and all but... I'll be honest I felt immensely more giddy and excited just by the little scene Gabriel & Charley had. I also was excited due to the fact that she seemed to be growing some feelings for him or at least attraction.
It also dawned at me, that there is a little problem if Charley were to like Gabriel, is because of her Mom and his Dad... yeah didn't realize that even after all the incest remarks William made lol.
I guess I don't care. But I don't really like Frank, so hopefully the Mom will come to her sense's and break up with him because Frank isn't working with her Family well, and she doesn't seem to be taking that all well.
I guess you can see I'm a Gabriel & Charley Fan/Shipper. I mean William & Charley are cute and all, but I prefer Gabriel. I think he really could be a real softy inside too. I dunno, you could change Gabriel into an evil menace (which I would not be happy about, btws), but that wouldn't make sense since she feels comfortable around him.
You see I believe that William was like her first 'love' and that Gabriel could be for the long run maybe? It would be really cool to see that process, and also see her feelings change.
But that's all up to you! I just hope you will be able to really explore Charley & Gabriel more. :)

Is it bad I kind of want Gabriel & Charley? More so then William?
I'm worried thought that Gabriel is either Gay/In love with someone else/will never be interested in her.
But it's only the sixth Chapter,18 more to go.
I guess my favorite Character right now is... Gabriel. Because he's a total mystery. I'm very interested to see more of him, and who he is. I also like all of Justin's friends, they're Funny and stupid, but okay. :)

I can just hear Jayland's voice at the end, dragging Charley's voice out in a sing-song sort of way before saying they brought the party to her. I think I may just like him the most. He's adorable, and not just because his character has an accent, promise! His personality is cute, too lol.
Very good story - I was hooked once I began reading it. Though, with all the guy characters it got sort of confusing.

Justin reminds me a lot of my younger brother. Like, a lot a lot. Wow.
Anyway! Very good story so far, figured I'd throw in that as a review :D