Nice twist at the end. I kinda knew that his aunt had been long gone, but the end still impacted me.

sweet muffins *fans self* the description...maginficent
and holy swiss cheese and crackers...THAT ENDING! I had a gut feeling that something befell of his aunt but the others...wowXD WHAT A TWIST!

Ooooooooooohhaaaaahhhh! I really liked it :3

you are great at descriptions! Gah why! I suck at them /

Well anyways...it was very unique. I would have never been able to write somethin like this!

~~DarknessesDownfall~~