Reviews for Skiing and Other Misdirections |
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![]() ![]() Wish this story was longer! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() I read this story days before..came back to comment it..It is really sweet story which is worthy reading. Him telling that boy likes girl and does nothing to get her is wrong..nicely put. You kind of capture the human internal feelings and adding humor tone..excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (think of this review as the one for chapter 2, sorry!) ahhhh! this is really good, just like the other oneshots you wrote! i love your style of writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really do hope that you're not abandoning this story, cause it's a really good plot, with a chance that i would never miss out on! hopefully you'll update soon cause i would love to see this story keep on growing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a cute story! I liked the casual nature of the building relationship. The characters were believable and it was fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy I got to read this! I've clicked on the description before hoping to read this oneshot and was disappointed to hear that it had been taken off, but I understand your reasoning for it. Thank you for re posting it - it was such an enjoyable read and I loved the characters :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute :) |
![]() ![]() Their relationship seemed kind of rushed to me, but not to the point that I hated the story. Quite the contrary, actually. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been wanting to read your stories for awhile now and was so happy to see that you posted some. This was a very good read! It was funny, even though it's based on a horrible experience. Great work! |
![]() ![]() HeyoMyFellowReaders101: This story is so cute. I like it! A lot. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SUPERRRR CUTE AND FLUFFYYYYY 3 |
![]() ![]() i thought she wanted a hot chocolate, not a coffee? anyway, great story:) |
![]() ![]() Not a hot chocolate after all then? Cute, I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! After reading the beginning of this, I felt as though you go skiing, a lot. Then your message at the end sealed the deal. Very well written, complete, clear ideas. Was visual without being long winded. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah! Gosh! How cute! |