|Reviews for Eternal: At A Loss Within This Darkness|
| Archia chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
"So I took those stars and made a map" Oh that's such a beautiful line, and it really painted n my mind a wonderful picture. I like how there was such a complicated and detailed story in this. Oh and I also enjoyed the way you structed it, with the darkness altogether and the light in separate lines.