Reviews for bruises
anachronistic chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
lovely, if a little dark, imagery.
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
The beginning was very promising. You could've done with a full stop after bite marks, to make the first three lines a perfect piece in itself. The lines after that, however, are a little lacking. Obvious somehow, and without the flow of the previous bit.