|Reviews for cutting my lips|
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
this is beautiful love.
i can't explain how i feel about this, but it's a good feeling.
| Kalopsia chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
"[S]tupid hormones," haha! I love this.
| darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This resonates incredibly well with me. You've yourself a gift here, for sure.
Also, just saying, I really, really like your penname.
You create really vivid imagery with just a few well placed words, which is rather impressive. I like the way the thoughts here kind of tumble out and lead into each other, and end with just the on, simple, kind of final, sort of wistful wish/want/desire. It's good. It brings everything to a rather nice (neat) halt, which I quite enjoyed.
Yes. That's all. :)
. darker shade of pale
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
file under: perfection that knocks the breath out of me
| josephdavisonduddles chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This is one of the best poems I've read on here for a while. It is emotive, imaginative and not cliched (wish is something many poems on similar themes are, I find). I really enjoyed this poem and I can't find any way to fault it. Thank you for uploading this, I'll definitely save it to favourites.
| Panchaali chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Wow well drawn picture...good flow...
| slowxromance chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Fantastic work on this. Very vivid and it flowed very well. I'll be checking out more of your work, for sure.