Reviews for Yellowish
BookcraZzaY chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
Treasured images

Unique style

And a perfect poem to get me into deep thought

Love you :3

You write such amazing work!

Keep it up and seruisly pm if you type more stuff cuz I haven't been checking my email in forever but I do check pms

Anyways love these poems more than the smell of popcorn!
BookcraZzaY chapter 10 . 3/18/2012
Haha I'm left handed!

Not a curse but an very unique comparison of it

I would never think of that

Greet one!
BookcraZzaY chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
Interesting poem!
BookcraZzaY chapter 8 . 3/18/2012
All originally amazing

Amd one disturbing

But the rest are fantastically perfect!
BookcraZzaY chapter 7 . 3/18/2012
BookcraZzaY chapter 6 . 3/18/2012
Lolz i get this strange image of an old guy (80) eating a jar of the baby food mashed peaches!

Really greet poem though ;)
BookcraZzaY chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
Beautiful images come to mind

It's an amazing one!

(and I thought nothing could top the last hehe)
BookcraZzaY chapter 4 . 3/18/2012

Serra toy ends with a bang

I love the cleverness and Catchiness of this!

My fave poem so far :D
BookcraZzaY chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Are the two eyes he sun and the moon or was it the eyes gazing into the views of Europe

Love the poem
BookcraZzaY chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
This ones interesting and makesme wonder what exactly is going into that mouth.

Which is why you're a wicked amazing writter!
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Haha love this! :3
josephdavisonduddles chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I don't enjoy Haikus but this is brilliant. Blunt but with so much imagery packed in too, I love it.
Nandiferd chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
The first poem reminds me of Basho (eg. Eaten alive by lice and fleas-now the horse beside my pillow pees). LOL.

The second one I got. I used to smoke and everything tasted fuzzy afterwards.

Thanks for sharing, Nandi.