|Reviews for Yellowish|
| BookcraZzaY chapter 11 . 3/18/2012
And a perfect poem to get me into deep thought
Love you :3
You write such amazing work!
Keep it up and seruisly pm if you type more stuff cuz I haven't been checking my email in forever but I do check pms
Anyways love these poems more than the smell of popcorn!
| BookcraZzaY chapter 10 . 3/18/2012
Haha I'm left handed!
Not a curse but an very unique comparison of it
I would never think of that
| BookcraZzaY chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
| BookcraZzaY chapter 8 . 3/18/2012
All originally amazing
Amd one disturbing
But the rest are fantastically perfect!
| BookcraZzaY chapter 7 . 3/18/2012
| BookcraZzaY chapter 6 . 3/18/2012
Lolz i get this strange image of an old guy (80) eating a jar of the baby food mashed peaches!
Really greet poem though ;)
| BookcraZzaY chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
Beautiful images come to mind
It's an amazing one!
(and I thought nothing could top the last hehe)
| BookcraZzaY chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Serra toy ends with a bang
I love the cleverness and Catchiness of this!
My fave poem so far :D
| BookcraZzaY chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Are the two eyes he sun and the moon or was it the eyes gazing into the views of Europe
Love the poem
| BookcraZzaY chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
This ones interesting and makesme wonder what exactly is going into that mouth.
Which is why you're a wicked amazing writter!
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Haha love this! :3
| josephdavisonduddles chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I don't enjoy Haikus but this is brilliant. Blunt but with so much imagery packed in too, I love it.
| Nandiferd chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
The first poem reminds me of Basho (eg. Eaten alive by lice and fleas-now the horse beside my pillow pees). LOL.
The second one I got. I used to smoke and everything tasted fuzzy afterwards.
Thanks for sharing, Nandi.