Reviews for You're Going To Get Us Killed
FoundtheLostHero chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
That was... well, I don't know how else to put it, but really cool! Reminded me of one of those classic stories where the hero falls, but rises again when needed most, absolutely fantastic! )
PhoebieB chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Wow. It is so true, they can't stay away forever. Love it. Please publish you're work! Xxx
InsaneGreenWriter chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
I really liked this. It is sad that sometimes the people you need most are never there when you need them or that your not there when someone needs you. It definitely has feeling.
True Talker chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Your not going to lose anyone, seriously. All good things are coming to you...
All Kinds of Brave chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
This is absolutely amazing. :3

I cannot wait to go read more from you.


Chloe xoxo
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
:) very greeeeeeeet : )

I love your use of metaphors and your perspective in this poem
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Beautiful imagery, vary emotional, cleverly weaved together,...

It's simply wonderful. :-)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
It's sad that the ones you need most don't need you which awful. I loved the imagery which was very violent and very emotional. It was simply amazing!
Eleantris chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I loved the emotion in this, the sort of edge of determination. It was brilliant. :D

X :D