That was... well, I don't know how else to put it, but really cool! Reminded me of one of those classic stories where the hero falls, but rises again when needed most, absolutely fantastic! )

Wow. It is so true, they can't stay away forever. Love it. Please publish you're work! Xxx

I really liked this. It is sad that sometimes the people you need most are never there when you need them or that your not there when someone needs you. It definitely has feeling.

Your not going to lose anyone, seriously. All good things are coming to you...

This is absolutely amazing. :3

I cannot wait to go read more from you.

Kiss-Kiss,

Chloe xoxo

:) very greeeeeeeet : )

I love your use of metaphors and your perspective in this poem

Beautiful imagery, vary emotional, cleverly weaved together,...

It's simply wonderful. :-)

It's sad that the ones you need most don't need you which awful. I loved the imagery which was very violent and very emotional. It was simply amazing!

I loved the emotion in this, the sort of edge of determination. It was brilliant. :D

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