Reviews for I'd like to know
Headhawk Moth chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
You asked for constructive critism, I don't have any for you,

Your poem is simply perfect, and from it this short one grew,

I like the emotion found in this text, all that's left for me to say,

Is that it's so easy to relate to and have a very nice day! :)
Doctor Alex chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Amazing... :3
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Sweet and sad, makes me want to give you a cuddle :)