Reviews for Wastrel
WithinWhimsy chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Please. Write. More. I am hungry, literally starving. This is nowhere near enough! This is fantastic, truly. The way you describe and portray characters and environment is like a fairy tale, a dark and very well written one at that. By far the best I have ever read on this site. Well done!
Neurotic Meanderings chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
"...You wake up one morning surrounded by perfectly sculpted lies and beautifully painted smiles and carefully forged "love". ..."

That is a beautiful line, well worth re-reading just to let the imagery flow.

Nicely written.
SniffingCrayons chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Wow. This should not be posted here; Its a masterpiece that people will steal to gain their own relevancy. Its too realistic for me to title it "beautiful" because the truth scares people like me. The extended use of vocabulary and perfect grammage usage stunned me. I've only been around this website for a few days and none of then were as literacy advanced as this story. I thought this site was for practicing and waiting for that one person to make you BIG, but you've shown worthiness of being a true author. I'm speechless. Bravo!