|Reviews for If revenge is ever righteous,|
| True Talker chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
This is written quite well and it has depth. Now I have to ask you this question; Are you okay?
| Inkspilled chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Wow. I adore your word choices. Pretty much, your first line had me and I especially love "I am inclined to grow scales". Your writing has great impact, and it's lovely in such an emotionally powerful way. I really loved it. :)
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
i like: "allocated heart", the image of a splintering cloud. i mean, your imagery leaves nothing to be desired, and i would normally say i want some backstory on how such a dramatic scene (to the point of precisely pristine overtness) came to be, but you've given it and flawlessly vague and simplistically complicated: revenge, some past "[laceration]". the question of righteousness is still up in the air, because you're not trying to tell us what to think/feel or moralize, because that would contradict the blood you're about to spill, metaphorically or not. pretty raw stuff.